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That voice change part was amazing. Great animation quality too

The animation was pretty nice overall, but I think there are some areas where it could have been better. First, the character dialogue just seems kind of flat and unrealistic. I think the lack of depth in their responses to each other is my largest criticism for this. Second, I think ending on a low quality image didn't make much sense to me because you could have just copied the same image from earlier (and comic sans didn't help) and it would have looked much nicer.
Besides the art at the end, everything else was really very nice and appealing- both background and character art were very clean!

This really isn't that bad of an animation you got here. This actually looks like something I would've made when I first started haha so I can see you're still kind of learning flash and maybe still finding your style. But I think my main criticism would be that ending on a loop is a bad idea. I was sitting there for like 2-3 loops around expecting it to change to the next scene before I read the Author Comments section and found out thats how it ends. Soooo I don't know if its unfinished or you intended to end it like that, but I think a more conclusive ending would be something to work towards. Overall you got some nice potential though!

Cheers bruh!

That was really cute haha. Great animation quality too in my opinion!
The only complaint I can say is that the ending seemed pretty sudden.
Awesome stuff though! I'll stay tuned in for sure

Ztoons responds:

Thank you very much! And yeah, I need to get better at that with my endings.

I like what you've done here... simple... elegant... and still sexy...
5/5

This... THIS IS ART!!!
I'd give this a strong Yam out of Yam- would Yam again.

I think it would be good for you (if you want to get more into animating) to look into the 12 principles of animation (video about that below).
These could really help out for physics in animation like this if you want it to pop more.
Sound would help too in making it feel more realistic.
Love how you used portal though to test out animating physics!
Keep up the cool animations dood!

(12 principles) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xqGL1ZLk3n8

burncore responds:

thanks for the help

Really liked the character art, but I think the background could use improvement (I would just avoid using pictures for backgrounds- especially if they're low quality pictures). But I think if you fix that up it will bring your video out more artistically. Pretty funny though still! Keep it up!

mbaker responds:

Unfortunately, I can't make backgrounds in anything other than Photoshop. How do you make backgrounds in Illustrator, or Flash?

I thought that was a great bit of satire! I thought the animation/art was decent enough but the voice acting really brought the characters out for me, and I'm not just saying that because its egoraptor( I actually thought it was good before I knew it was him haha). I think the shirt advertising at the end actually kind of urked me the wrong way to be honest - ending on an ad left me with a kind of worse impression. I mean I get that you need to promote your stuff, but I think it was kind of layed on a bit too thick at the end(at least for me). However, if people are actually buying your shirts I'll shut up haha.

All things considered It was still a funny flash! 3.5 skulls out of 5 .. I mean 3.5 stars out of 5!

Great concept for a video! The Audio was well done and I'm sure the animation would have been great if your animatic drawings are this nice haha. I really wanted to vote 5 because it was great, but the fact that it is just an animatic made it ultimately feel incomplete :( - even if it is a good animatic. But after seeing this I wanna go sneak a peek at your other work now haha :3

Great Job Dood!

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